Abstract: When this assignment was introduced to me, I immediately began thinking of political views that I held strongly, and I decided on the imperialistic intentions Trump has with Gaza. After I had my topic, I just made an outline and did an essay format structure. I did a read-through to make sure I was using words that were more aggressive and argumentative. If I had more time, I would try to experiment with the structure, maybe start off with all the disasters of past imperialistic intentions. I would also do a better rhetorical analysis on my work to convey my point more strongly.

Revision: I made some revisions to my work after the peer-review session, where I was encouraged to cite my work properly and ensure that I had clear indication where i cited evidence. I initially thought I was just supposed to put it in quotations and leave it like that, but after review it made much more sense to cite them properly for the readers.