Abstract: For my In-Class essay, I wrote about the husband stich and answered the prompt of how relationship/marriage affected the narrative. I was prepared for it beforehand with an outline which acted as a double-edged sword when I tried to follow it strictly, but it was still helpful in many ways. If I had more time, I would choose better words to improve in repetitiveness and streamline my essay.

Revision: I made only minor changes to my essay, primarily to streamline some ideas and to do a general proofread.